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In HOW TO GROW A NOVEL, Stein presents some illuminating information for the fiction author. He intends to "write a book in which I could deal with the most important recurrent problems in the same depth as I would in an extended meeting with an individual author." And so he does.
The book is divided into two sections: The Responsibilities of the Writer and The Responsibilities of the Publisher. The appendix has two additional sections under the label of Practical Matters: The Little Things that Damage the Writer's Authority (on the use of dialect, on binding manuscript pages, for example, and how long your book should be) and Where Writers Get Help (in this chapter he promotes his own books and computer programs, but he does mention others).
In Responsibilities of the Writer, Stein says that the reader of fiction is looking for "an experience different from his or her everyday experiences in life." It's not that the reader doesn't welcome insight and information, but it's the experience of the story that keeps him or her glued to the page. Stein's objective "is to help novelists perfect their skill in making the reader turn pages, to forget that he is reading, to live among characters that once resided only in the writer's head and now seem true and memorable to strangers."
The time to consider the reader's experience - that is, the effect that each scene sequence will have on the reader -- is not when you are writing a book but when you are planning it. In a series of questions and answers he demonstrates just how to do that using examples from his own work and from works he has edited.
Stein discusses the necessity for conflict and demonstrates that conflict may not necessarily be violent, but it is the very essence of dramatic action. In the manuscripts he sees, he writes, "the fault is seldom too much conflict." So he goes on to show just how to create an adversarial sense in order to keep the reader on edge of expectation.
Another responsibility of the writer is to capture the reader, to create a "love at first sight" kind of experience. The beginning must grab her, glue her to the page and the rest of the book must not let go until the very end. The use of surprise, the building of tension, the use of detail to clarify and intensify, twisting a plot point into something else - he illustrates each suggestion with an example from his own work or something he has edited.
Stein emphasizes the importance of building realistic characters, yet his approach is a little different. One suggestion he makes: If you are struggling with a flat character, he says, take a look in his pocket (or, presumably, her purse). Find something that would surprise him/her greatly. Then answer the questions he poses.
Finding plots, creating dialogue, the best point of view, writing with honesty and focus - all of these are areas where the writer has a responsibility to the reader and Stein gives new insight into how to achieve them in fiction. He attacks specifics in revision. Removing redundancies and author intrusion, eliminating melodrama and extra words and phrases, replacing cliché "beats" with small, appropriate actions, changing events that are "told" into active scenes are just some of the problems he illustrates.
"The function of an editor," he writes, "is to help a writer achieve the writer's intentions." The many suggestions and exercises in this book should do exactly that, whether his reader is a published author or novice writer. It's stunning to discover that the single most common mistake that Stein has seen, "including the work of professionals," is words, sentences and paragraphs out of order.
For the nonfiction writer there's an entire chapter on "Fundamentals for Emigrants from Nonfiction" that will shortcut a long road that might otherwise by a trial-and-error one full of pitfalls. The 70 or so tips certainly shortcut the process of revising fiction.
I must admit that I have avoided Sol Stein's works because of a past experience with his crass commercialism in promoting his software for writers. However I can say, without reservation, that HOW TO GROW A NOVEL is a truly useful and enlightening book for every writer, whatever her level of experience.
Chapters cover:
Conflict
Characters
Plots
Dialogue
Point of View
Crafting Your Words
Revision
Nonfiction Emigrants
Each chapter tackles important fundamentals writers often struggle with. Stein uses real-life examples from popular novels to illustrate his point, making it even easier to apply his suggestions to your own writing.
Whether you're a published author or just beginning your writing venture, Stein's experience can definitely help. He talks candidly about what works and what doesn't. "How to Grow a Novel" also spells out the key ingredients your novel should contain as well as how to incorporate them into your own writing.
Whether a beginning novelist or a New York Time's best-selling author, "How To Grow A Novel" has much to offer. Readers will learn of the necessity of conflict, how to compose effective dialogue, proper point-of-view, and most importantly - how to capture the reader (so as not to commit the cardinal sin of boring one's audience). Stein also gives his thoughts on common mistakes made by writers, including those made during the revision process.
But the true value of this book stems from its emphasis on the fundamentals. Certain elements pertain to all good writing, such as the effort to use no unnecessary words. Stein stresses those elements, and if applied, they will make fair writers good and good writers great. Like Webster's Dictionary and a thesaurus, "How To Grow A Novel" should be a handy reference on every serious writer's desktop. I've personally benefited from its guidance, and I highly recommend it to other aspiring authors.
Britt Gillette
Author of "Conquest of Paradise: An End-Times Nano-Thriller"
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Plus, his exercise on "finding your voice" may be the hardest writing lesson you'll ever face.
Do you want your plot to MOVE?
Do want to set the hook in readers on the first page and hold them through to the end?
Do you want dialog that supports each character's character, that adds drama to your story?
Do you want to show rather than tell?
Do you want to get the flab out of your writing?
If your answer on any of the above is "yes", get "Stein on Writing". You'll find, too, that I've only scratched the surface of what's in it. Sol Stein knows what he's talking about here. And he doesn't waste a word, which is why this huge book is only 300 pages. I read it in a day but I'll never be through with it -- here it sits, open, at my left elbow, marked up something awful.
I applied the advice in this little book to a "finished" manuscript that had been professionally edited, it had received valuable input from some fine readers, and I was satisfied that it was as good as I could get it. Now, a month after Stein dropped in the story is 20 percent shorter and there is more to it.
I write non-fiction as well, and it's going to be a lot better from here on out because Stein covers that, too.
I don't care who you are, I'll bet you 50 cents this book will improve your writing.
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Set in a redwood forest high atop the coast of Big Sur, "Resort" is a starkly written, fast-moving thriller that I read in less than a day. The novel portrays the deep angst of persecution for the Jewish people and reminds us all that we must continue the fight against religious intolerance, lest we become victim to its evil.
The author writes from the omniscient point of view and escorts the reader into the minds of many characters, including the antagonists. Stein is a delightful storyteller who uses minimal description and good characterization to create a fast-paced plot. A great read.
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For me it is the characters. Their voices are so strong and vibrant. I liked every one. And not a one of them sounds the same. The plot was great too but the characters really make the book. I love them.
When I finished this book I went right back to "on writing" and read it again. This time secure in the knowledge I was learning from a master of his craft.