I admit that the plot wasn't the most exciting- it was basically a vehicle for the book's social issues. However, I found the issues discussed in the book more than enough to keep me reading to the end.
I have since read two more by the same author, Trouble And Her Friends and Night Sky Mine, which are more traditional cyberpunk adventures. While they're OK (and are unusual in that their heroines and heroes are mostly gay), they don't center around the same kind of ideas that made me think while reading Shadow Man. It's definitely the most interesting of the three.
Best book I read last year. Absolutely recomended and I hope they reprint it!
The universe of Five-Twelfths is a fairly standard one in some ways. The Hegemon, a widening empire of many planets, is a tightly-controlled, autocratic society that places extreme limits on women; women must be veiled at all times, aren't allowed to own property or take legal actions, etc. However, the fantasy element comes in with the elements of star travel, which are much like magic, and especially the magi, who are able to use spells to control both Purgatory (the celestial, partially supermaterial state attainable by material creatures) and Hell (the submaterial state). The blending of the typical SF and unusual fantasy elements make this world a unique and complete creation, interesting in its own right.
The plot is also fairly good. Five-Twelfths is the story of Silence, a woman in the very male-restricted profession of pilot. Caught up in circumstances beyond her control, she makes an unusual alliance, finds herself pitted against the Hegemony, and discovers that she has powers in excess of anything anyone expected.
All in all, a satisfying read and much more interesting than is usual in science fantasy blends. Scott makes the most of her talents in this book - pity it's out of print, but many libraries will have a copy.
(NB: Five-Twelfths of Heaven is the first in a trilogy - the sequels are Silence in Solitude and The Empress of Earth - that should definitely be read in order.)
I don't think the quality of 5-12ths of Heaven is *quite* on the same level as the two sequels, but that may be because the book is so occupied with getting Silence into *trouble* that it comes off as a little too relentless. Some of the scenes could have been written with a touch more humor which would have helped the overall flow.
On the other hand, Scott's description of the space drive used is absolutely otherworldly, fantastic, and wonderfully poetic. You will find yourself rereading these books over and over again simply for the descriptions of the travel alone.
Other scenes that come to mind--Silence's testing to become a practitioner (extra meaning for those of us who have gone through a thesis defense!), the flying of the Earth road, the trip via the portolan, and the trip into Man's Island by trans.
It's unfortunate that these books are out of print--I and a friend of mine immediately snap up any copies we ever find at used book stores to keep on hand as gifts for friends who appreciate good SF. I hope that some publisher will reprint them.
I have to admit I never finished reading this book. After half of it, I decided that the plot wasn't nearly strong enough, the characters weren't alive, and the setting was too mundane to keep my interest. Compared to Trouble, the tech in this book is peanuts - the computers aren't too much further along than those we have today - and not much else has changed. Such near-future settings can work, obviously, but there wasn't enough substance here.
I would love to see this idea - the jazz - rewritten in a shorter format. As the basis for a novel, I don't think it's strong enough; especially not as the basis for a thriller like this book wants to be.
My only minor quibbles are that Keyz is underdevloped as a character, and the ending is a little too quick to be satisfying. Tin Lizzy is well-rendered, however, and the descriptions of surfing the net are truly interesting. It's not hard to believe that the future Scott describes may be the way we're headed. For another, different version of the future Internet, I also recommend Shariann Lewitt's "Interface Masque".
There are some great sections in this book: they're hard, and fast, and flowing, with great potential for visualization. Yet they appear to be bound together with afterthought. It reads as if Scott wrote several strong scenes and then loosely tied them together. I found myself looking ahead of my place on more than one occasion, especially with the repetative net node descriptions, and was able to loose neither plot nor character development.
So I rate this fair. It's a good read but nothing special.
My only other comment is a question. Are we being set up, during the denouement, for the return of Trouble? As a shorter story I hope so.
The story is basically a thriller with some science fiction behind it. Trouble, a retired hacker (a la William Gibson's Case) returns to the business to track down a hacker who is using her name and reputation. She meets up with her ex-girlfriend, and they travel across the country on their mission. This isn't that bad, and Scott's settings and descriptions are interesting enough, but the whole thing ends up in an action climax and a too-happy ending that doesn't seem real at all.
The virtual reality sequences are another problem. By the time Scott wrote this, personal computer were much more widespread than in Gibson's day, so she's weighed down by reality. Sometimes it's like reading about some guy using a modern computer, which is in no way exciting or interesting. She writes these scenes in present tense, but sometimes forgets and slips into past tense.
The characters weren't bad, except Scott is constantly forcing out feminist and gay issues with absolutely no subtlety. Feminist and gay issues certainly have a place in science fiction, and even in this book, but the symbolism was just too obvious and far-fetched.
If you've read any book by William Gibson or Bruce Sterling, Trouble and Her Friends will be too familiar, and it isn't worth the energy required to get through Scott's always-troublesome first 50 pages.
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I was often annoyed by the very poor editing of this book. It's rife with grammar and spelling mistakes which essentially act like reading speed bumps. The author also has a habit of inserting lengthy statements into the middle of sentences by hyphenating them - often at awkward places, and often several lines in length, in fact sometimes quite a bit longer than this one, making sentences rather hard to follow- when a separate sentence would be much cleaner. By the end of the book, I was pretty tired of having to reread the beginnings of sentences due to this.
Another bad habit which pops up throughout the book is the unexplained use of made-up words. Apparently the author feels that to stop and explain every new term would bog things down, which is true, but instead of limiting her use of meaningless words, she just throws them around and lets the reader's imagination go at them. While this is fine to some extent, there is too much of it in this book. There are lists of names of cyberspace denizens which serve no purpose at all. On the other hand, I would have liked more description of some of the terms, like "hypothecary". The main character is studying to become one, and the reader learns a bit about it through her actions, but still many questions are left unanswered. The reader would have been better served by more description of the important terms and less use of the meaningless ones.
The cyberspace concept here is fairly original, although like almost every other cyberspace in SF, it's too far removed from the reality of electronic information to be believable to anyone with a technical background. The portrayal of software personified as flora and fauna is an interesting one in concept, but the execution goes wa! y too far in giving data the attributes of physical objects or creatures. Too many times I found myself wondering why things would have developed the way they had in the book.
Like most of the author's protagonists, the main characters are gay, although unlike some of her other work, that point is irrelevant to the story. This book isn't about gay characters, it's about characters who happen to be gay. Unfortunately, these gay heroes are all pretty one-dimensional. Except for Ista, the main protagonist, practically no background is given for any of the characters. Even Ista's origins are a mystery to both the characters and the reader. Likewise, the only growth or development any of the characters experience in the book is the occasional reference to Ista's budding romantic feelings towards her friend Stinne. Even this doesn't go anywhere- the situation between them is basically the same at the end of the book as at the beginning.
All in all, this book was a decent effort, but no single aspect of it really held my attention for very long. Even the ending was something of a letdown- it felt like the author wasn't sure how she should end it and ended up leaving too much unresolved. It screams "sequel". Unfortunately there are too many books on the shelf better than this one for me to continue with this story.
In the far-future universe of the book, programs are no longer written, they're bred. They've been equipped with replication, attack, and defense code, and they live in the invisible world, preying on and interbreeding with other programs to form new ones. In the wildnets, programs interbreed at will, and are subject to evolutionary pressure - the wildnets are essentially a virtual ecosystem. Unfortunately, this opens up both the possibilities for useless or undesirable programs and the outside chance that a superprogram will evolve.
Ista, the main character, is an apprentice hypothecary, one who harvests wild program and analyzes code. She's lived for almost all her life in the coporation-owned Audumla system. She knows nothing of her antecedents; at age two, Ista was the sole survivor of a mineship attack, and was adopted by her rescuer. Without knowledge of her parents, she is not a legal citizen, so when she meets two men who are investigating mineship disasters, she has to help them. Together, they expose an illegal wild breeding effort and put themselves in danger.
The characters are likeable and fairly realistic. Ista is a streetwise adolescent, but definitely still not fully adult, and by far the most full-fleshed of the characters. The relationships between the characters are, at least in the first half, both believeable and understandable. (For example, Sein and Justin, the two men, fight the way long term couples fight.) In the second half, the characters are subsumed by the plot, which is unfortunate.
Good Scott novels leave you wanting to know more about the world, the setting, and this one is no exception. Although the plot is interesting enough to hold attention, it's really just a framework for exploring the universe. The book would have been better had the plot been more complex - and the book quite a bit longer - but it's a great SF read nonetheless.
Overall, the technology and the relationships between the people in this story kept me interested enough to finish the book.