Unfortunately, this book falls far short of the mark.
The book is moderately well-researched (which is the reason for the 2-star rating), but the writing style is stilted (Brenda's lengthy narrative recounting her first experiences with Owain, is, frankly, silly), and the plot totally improbable. As an example: Why, if Owain's love for Brenda is as strong as he claims it is; why, if Owain values Brenda's keen intellect as much as he claims to; why, despite all this, would he give her the dubious choice of giving her newborn son to another woman *or* having it drowned all because of an off-hand statement made during an evening of drinking with the guys? This makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, given the portraits of the characters drawn by the author. And it only gets worse.
Then there's the issue of typos. While I realize that a mass-market paperback isn't of the same high quality as a hardbound edition, there's simply no excuse for the many typos I found before I finally put the book down.
I haven't found another account of the Madoc legend, other than non-fiction versions. I'd love to see this story in the hands of a skilled writer.
Meanwhile, if you find this period of history interesting (mid-12th-century and the civil war spawned by the struggle for the English crown between Stephen and Matilda), check out Sharon Kay Penman's "When Christ and His Saints Slept." It's extraordinarily well researched and well-written, with complete consistent characters and a believable story.
This first offering deals solely with Brenda, a Welsh handmaiden of the 12th century, mistress of Owain, prince of Wales whose son, Madoc, purportedly reached the Americas way before Columbus and may have founded the Mandan Indian tribe of North Dakota. Brenda loves Owain, but as one of his concubines, has little power to pursue her dream of becoming a Druid healer. When her third child is born and Owain demands that she give up this child to his bereaved wife or drown him, Brenda decides to flee Wales for Ireland. She successfully protects her child, Madoc, from their pursuers and only after he is fostered does she return reluctantly to Wales where Owain and his household engulf her again with their day-to-day intrigues. As Owain ages, Brenda finds herself in the tumultuous position of make-shift counselor. Fearfully, she watches as his older sons battle for a foothold in their father's realm; one in particular will use any means to gain control of his father's power. Her one hope is Madoc, whom the druids prophesized would accomplish great things for the Welsh people. When he appears in Wales a man grown, she finds he is the lightbearer to a path where she can realize her own dreams and simultaneously aid him in fullfilling his destiny.
All the elements of a great historical drama are utilized in 'Circle of Stones', however, their allignment fails to achieve anything beyond a mediocre telling of the tale. Brenda curries no distinguishing character traits that memorialize her in fiction. Owain merely struts and then dodders and drools in a most unsatisfying predictable sequence of events that is meant to illustrate the threat Wales faced in an uneasy alliance with the English king Henry. Rather than compel, the third person narrative style employed by Waldo, bores. I have no intention of picking up the next volume of the trilogy. Instead I will research the Mandan Indians and their connection to the Welsh via the library and the Internet. Even die-hard druid fans would find 'Circle of Stones' lacking...
After the birth of Madoc his mother, Brenda, flies to Ireland wish her new born son in order to save his life. She leaves Madoc in the care of Irish Druids and after she is re- captured by Madoc's father, Prince Owain of Wales, tells Owain that Madoc is dead and resumes her life in Wales, with it's royal intrigues, it's threat of an English invasion and the battle between old and new religions.
Waldo has certainly done her research on 12th century Britain and sometimes it seems she doesn't want to waste any of it. We read much of Druid remedies and diets which sometimes hinders the narrative flow. The plot is slow moving sometimes, and there is the rather clumsy device of heading each chapter with a quote from a text to inform us of the historical events. I was grateful for the knowledge, for these were turbulent, confusing times, however it does lead to a rather jerky story line. The story is told almost exclusively from Brenda's point of view which means much of the action seems to be happening "off stage" and we hear of dramatic incidents second hand. The action does pick up as the story progresses and the book ends with Madoc preparing to sail on uncharted waters.
The book has it's faults but I did enjoy it, largely because of it's subject matter and I look forward to the next in the series.
off on the wrong foot with me. They go net fishing for
Oysters, and FIND THEM! (Oysters live on the sea bottom and never
move for their entire adult life)
This book might be well-researched, but the author takes liberties where she shouldn't. IF attention to detail
is important to you, this book will frustrate.
Sometimes the story line is a bit confusing, the author blasts
forth with information that she assumes (?) you know, and eventually, through details, you figure it out.