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The trials and tribulations that she endures is the essence of this novel coupled with her own unique background. For you see, Renay is Black and a lesbian. Her lover, Terry is white. Two lesbians of different backgrounds and races defy the sexual and racial mores of their time. What a wonderful tale full of possibilities.
Those possibilities never blossom. All of the characters are predictable in their dialogue and come across as one dimensional. Renay's spurned husband is the stereotypical misoganist with a deep hatred for lesbians. Renay come across as a passive woman needing to find salvation in her white lover's sanctum. Even Terry's love making with Renay comes across as a mechanical exercise in exploring new sexual techniques.
This novel had the seeds within it to explore the relationships of interracial lesbian couples. Instead, it comes across as a boring tome guarenteed to put anyone to sleep. It is a failed classic that could have offered so much more.
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There you have it, all the elements of a good story. Issues of Black men's sexism, white women's racism, Black females reluctance to join a "women's movement" and the crass homophobia of the Black church are just waiting to be explored. Yet none of these issues come together in a story which has so much potential but is technically flawed. How is this?
1. Shockley gives a detailed explanation of the issues as if the reader doesn't or can't understand what is going on.
2. All of the characters are overly stereotyped to the point of being unbelievable.
3. She has very poor transitions. A character could be a gay hater in one paragraph and on the next page a converted person with no explanation of why.
4. Shockley deals with so many issues that the main plot gets lost and the story ends abruptly.
Shockley could have done much better. This story deserves a much better telling. I truly wanted to give this story at least a 4 star but after reading it I couldn't justify giving it those stars. As a collectors item of Black lesbian fiction this book will be an asset in your library but nothing more.