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Shiva Dancing starts off dramatically, with an intimate picture of the village Indian culture, during which Meena is kidnapped from her wedding at seven years of age and ends up with adoptive parents in San Francisco. Exciting, but downhill from there. Rather than beginning by returning Meena to India when she is an adult, to search for her past and her future among her people, family, and child-groom, Meena and the author do their best to avoid that storyline (it would have been a good one) and get bogged down in unimportant details and relationships in the US. Meena is a woman focused on her job, finding a man, distance running, finding a man, patio gardening, and finding a man. She has only a mild background interest in India, her past, and her child-groom Vishnu. She is not a haunted, lonely, longing woman lost between the two cultures that join within her spirit (which would have been a good character). The major portion of the book is filled with Meena's friendships; her flirtation with Carlos, a charming, manipulative commitment-phobe; and her love affair with Antoine, a less charming, more manipulative commitment-phobe. Antoine is about to get engaged to his long-time girlfriend but now he wants a fling with Meena to avoid the commitment. Meena, who the author keeps reminding us is 35 and very intelligent, should know better. An opportunist is easy to spot. But Meena falls for it because Antoine has such sadness and suffering in his eyes. What's he got to suffer about? Well, nothing. He's wealthy, famous, acutely handsome, engaged to be married and playing around with Meena. No, there's no trauma or torment in his life -- just that he's a louse. Meena falls for it, though she should be focused on her own pain, confusion, and needs, but she is too shallow to let her own life truly affect her. The romance advances as, about halfway through the book, Kirchner suddenly shifts into Antoine's head, showing him to be a tender, teary-eyed, aging man who is soooo confused about his life. Oh, please.
The plot is also bogged down by Meena's work place and career, which is in peril. Here again the characters are shallow and awkward, drawn to suit the situation rather than made real and driving the situation. However, there are just too many characters and too many subplots throughout, so when the real story gets going in India, finally, after nearly 300 pages, it is told sketchily, with no real significance except that Meena flatly states she finds she is American, not Indian. Meena's story is intercut occasionally with Vishnu's, her long-lost child-groom. He too is awkwardly characterized, and his situation is supposed to lend mystery to the book. It doesn't -- his passages are uninteresting and tell little about life in India, so it becomes a pleasure to return to Meena's and Antoine's silly romance.
Shiva Dancing is not a bad book -- it was entertaining, though overwritten with detail and more about San Francisco culture or computer programming than Indian culture. It is no follow- up to M.M. Kaye's The Far Pavilions or Shadow of the Moon, which were so rich with Indian culture that it was awesome, or Ruth Prawer Jhabvala's novels and short stories (double-awesome!). I have hope for Kirchner. Her writing style is good and readable, but the substance needs a lot of revision. Despite having too many characters in Shiva Dancing, she is still in control of her story. This shows real promise. It is not easy to write a novel, a first novel or a subsequent one, but Kirchner has the talent. She is capable of writing intelligent and memorable novels if she will make the effort and discard this sort of silly, shallow fluff.
Some of the characters were pretty one-dimensional, especially the Gossetts. What were they doing in India at all if they were so anti-India? What was the deal about their son getting killed there?
When Meena leaves Karamgar, she doesn't seem to want to return there...yet then at the end she wants to go back and do computer training.
The love story might have been a bit contrived, but I'm a romantic at heart I guess.
Even in spite of all these critiques, I really enjoyed this book. I liked reading about modern India, the perspective of a village child transplanted in cosmopolitan India and the U.S., and the life of a single woman with a dog-eat-dog career in San Francisco. I think this was great as a first novel. I have confidence that Kirchner will continue to refine her novel-writing skills. I look forward to reading her other work.
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Apart from the obvious mastery of the language in descriptions, the story is an ode to self-growth and sufficiency, both for men and women. As in reality, love is not a bed of roses. Instead, real love is the ability to love oneself first, then the other. This can be seen when Aloka simulates being Parveen; she fell in love with her first, then discovered that she loved Jahar just as well.
It is a book I greatly recommend for all those who enjoy an intricate story without the classical happy ending.